David Kennedy, University of Hull
Abstract
The
call for papers for Rhythm in Twentieth-Century British Poetry comments
that a great deal of the twentieth century's best and most interesting
British poetry remains, with regard to its rhythm, under-described'.
This speaks to several important and interrelated questions: what does
it mean to be able to observe and describe rhythm? And does the ability
to make such a description give us more' knowledge about a poem or does
it merely support illusions that poems, in contrast to other texts, have
accessible interiorities that enable the transmission of truths?
Crucially, how does the description of a poem's rhythm converge with and
reveal the cultural politics in play in that poem? All these questions
are well worth exploring. However, this paper will argue that they are
to some extent secondary to the question of how rhythm and its
description have been and continue to be involved in the production of
the reader.
This paper will explore this question
by examining two very different poets, Philip Larkin and Keston
Sutherland. The choice of two poets from parallel traditions is
deliberate. Larkin's poetry is held by both apologists and antagonists
to exemplify a poetry of empirical reconstruction while Sutherland's
poetry seems bent on energetically evading easy links between experience
and ideas. Larkin wrote that you've seen this sight, felt this feeling,
had this vision, and have got to find a combination of words that will
preserve it by setting it off in other people'; while Sutherland's
poetry questions the very ethics of such a precise focus.
Beginning with an overview of the questions in the first paragraph of
this proposal, this paper will go on to give a detailed account of
Larkin's poem Mr Bleaney' (with reference to other Larkin poems as
appropriate). My reading of the poem will question the view of his
poetry as empiricist reconstruction and will argue that Larkin in fact
teases us with the fictiveness of shared experience. I will seek to show
how Larkin's poem elides apparent empiricism with bathos and how rhythm
in the poem is itself used bathetically. Sutherland has written that
Ideas are the index of my exclusion from a sovereignty I despise: the
more passionately I can express my ideas, the more conspicuously I am
excluded.' In this context, I will argue that Larkin's poem elides
apparent empiricism, bathos and rhythm used bathetically to mime
consensus and poetry-as-consensus and then register dissent. Empiricism,
bathos and rhythm are used together as a means of location. Class is
very important in 'Mr Bleaney': the poem locates itself, the social
position of its narrator and, by extension that of its readers. And
this, in turn, has the effect of producing a particular type of reader, a
reader who regards themselves as superior in their ability to share in
the poet's attitudes - in this instance, dissent.
The final part of this paper will argue that part of the challenge of
Sutherland's poetry is not so much that a reader cannot work out what a
poem is 'about' or 'who' is speaking as that the reader does not know
'who' he or she is supposed to be. The reader that Larkin's poetry
produces is formed by what Brendan O'Donnell and Derek Attridge have
identified in other contexts as an interplay between a metrical abstract
and an individual reader; and by what Simon Jarvis has called
collectively performed expectations' about prosody. In contrast,
Sutherland's poetry is concerned with dramatising incompleteness and the
impossibility of wholeness and does so using clusters of words and
sudden jolts. This gives the poetry not only a challenging sense of
'liveness' but also a sense of form as something that is always on the
point of becoming. The overall effect of this is to force the reader not
only to experience the condition of the self as something that is often
barely tolerable but also to encounter the poetry as embodied thinking
as opposed to the product of reflection. However, this should not be
taken to suggest that Sutherland's poetry is careless about prosody -
indeed, it is often more careful than its mainstream counterparts.
I shall conclude by arguing that these two very
different poets tell us much about how rhythm constructs the reader and
that more work in this area will enable us to read the extent to which
individual poems or bodies of work converge with or diverge from a
critique of representation-as-politics.
Bibliography
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Catherine Addison, 'Stress Felt, Stroke Dealt: The Spondee, the Text, and the Reader', Style, Volume 39, Number 2 (Summer 2005), pp.153-174.
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